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Cori'Senteye Yuralt: The Jedi Fashionista (WIP)

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Name: Cori'Senteye Yuralt
Species: Human Theelin Hybrid
Age: 21 (3632 BBY)
Hair Colour: White (Natural), Purple (Dyed)
Eye Colour: Purple
Height: 5'10 ft (177.8 cm)
Profession: Self Proclaimed Jedi Knight, Fashion Designer, Offical Jedi Padwan, Mercanry
Likes: Fashion, parties, dancing, technology, love, music, singing, sparring, weight training, her freinds, making new freinds, art, swimming
Dislikes: Frumpy brown robes, stick in the muds, prudes, boardem, killing, Sith, criminals, hutts, bullies, mean people, the darkside
Bio: Born on 0 BTC (3611 BBY) on Courasant to a family of what Cori best describes as entertainers (or rather a traveling culture dedicated to art in all its forms), Cori'Senteye Yuralt was named after the planet she was born on, Courasant. However up until her time in the Jedi order she had only ever visited the world four times, and spend the entierity of her life traveling within her troupe's ship/home, moving from world to world to provide entertainment to the people of the galaxy. Growing up in a culture that treated every single ascpect of their lives Cori naturally became obsessed with perfecting her own art forms, and took to dance and singing, although often assisted her mother in making clothes for the troupe alongside her twelve sisters and four brothers: although everyone onboard the ship was considered family. Considered somthing of a prodigy by her family she wa performing by the age of five in bit parts of plays and dances, and even sung for a royal family when she was seven as part of some small isolated world. She would also become one many of her peoples famed ribbon dancers and even made a small liing with her mother from the clothes she designed and sold.

Still all good things come to an end. When she was 13 Cori's family made the mistake of performing for a Sith Lord, who was so impressed by the aliens skills that he decided he must have them and launched a brutal attack after they left his system, capturing many of the troupe and killing many more. Cori'Senteye was smuggled aboard her ships loan cargo shuttle by her mother who stayed behined to lead the Imperial Troopers off, sending Cori off into the depths of space with autopilot. Cori has yet to learn the fate of her family. Still wheather through luck or through the force a Jedi stumbled on her craft and saved the young girl who was clearly trumatised by the whole ordeal and sent her to a Jedi relief centre as he venured off to save her family. He never returned.

However Cori, once again wheather through luck or the force, was given to the relief station who missunderstood the Jedi masters orders and sent her to Tython as a potential student, not fully understanding what had happend to Cori. Cori in turn did not understand where she was, as up untill that point knew very little of the Jedi, and as such bumbled around the Jedi temple for a good few weeks before she accidentl stumbled into some lessons. Initially copying other initiates routines, thinking she was learning dance moves, it did not take long after that for the instructors to realise their mistake. Even so Cori had made rapid progress compared to other students, and as she had already begun showing the early beginings of manifesting her powers they decided to press ahead with her training.

Givien over to the Jedi Academy of Kaleth, Cori'Senteye was considered by many others a complete oddball. While many students at that time often came in their early teens, Cori stood apart from even them half not knowing what she was doing, yet jumping into it with an enthusiasm that left many startled. The young initiate found the force intoxciating, and the studies excitng and challenging, strongly following the Jedi belief in mastering ones self and perfecting themselves for the good of others. It was hear she earned a reputation, first for being a over excitable ball of energy, and second for completely disreguarding the academy's dress code, wearing whatever she wanted and even making her own clothes despite the masters attempts to stop her. Still once she stareted making clothes for the other initiates in the academy the Masters largely gave up, and Cori remained completely ignorant of the whole ordeal. She would nonetheless go onto make many freinds, none so dear as the padwan Anwyeth and fellow initiate Xandac, where the three promising students earned the title of the 'big three' due to their tight freindship and great skill.

It was also during this time the masters atempted to rain in Cori'Senteye's niave wild side, pushing her towards becomming a padwan, and a Jedi Artisan. From here she developed her love of art into a love of technical design, studyinglightsabres and even body armour, making and creating parts and devices for her and the other students to use. Yet as a few years passed by Cori began to understand more and more about the Jedi code, boths its pros and its limitations, indeed its ability not  to 'love'. And for Cori who 'loved' everyone this began to eat away at her, and as the masters began to make her supress her emotions she began to feel herself die a little inside. And as the war dragged on, she saw her close freinds slowly give themselves up to the code of the Jedi and calm themselves, but in Cori's eyes give up who they were, when Cori felt she could be who she was and still protect the galaxy. Nonetheless when she tried to approach one of her fellow student over her worries, the student told her with a smile that she would have to sacrafice who she was for the good of the galaxy: and yet as Cori listened she felt as though her freind had died and given over her originality to be a cast and copy Jedi who was like all the others. And in her innocence and youth she paniced and fled, not realising the full ramifications of what her freind meant. She stole a shuttle and fled into the galaxy trying to go out and be the Jedi she felt she could be!

However Cori failed, she was still to young, only being sixteen, and was still not skilled enough to be on her own. She wound up starving and dhydrating on tatooine before her future Jedi master Andis found her and rescued Cori from death. They only found her through the vision of her long time freind Anwyeth. Ironically it was thanks to Cori running that she had been spared the destruction of the Jedi temple and avoided the Zakuall invasion of the core worlds. Still seeing such destruction and realising how foolish she was is what made her return to the ways of the Jedi under master Andis. Andis however was a very laxed master, who belived one should be at peace with ones self and pushed Cori to be both herself and a protector. To seek peace with her own faults and pros and pushing her to better understand who she was going to be. Here at the Praxeum of the Tempest, Cori honned her skills, largely alone due to Andis always being busy, but overtime took her already impressive natural gifts and turned them towards her being a warrior as well as a tool. Cori while content to make the tools and armour for her freinds, also took to the front to beter defend them herself. And here she would make many more freinds and in this chaotic time even find herself the subject of many admires who wanted to be with her.

Still over time and with the formation of the Alliance Cori could only go so far with her skills and needed direct training, so another knight, Mar'Bora, noting Cori's skill agreed to become Cori's new master while master Andis dedicated herself fully towards the alliance. And it was Mar'bora who took Cori from a young warrior and took her skill and enthusiasm and honned her into a weapon to defend the people, while never dampening her youthful spirit, even encoraging her to follow her heart into a relationship, and turning her above adverage skills as a figher into a artful and precise blademaster herself. Still when Mar'Bora challenged the council over a variety of issues and she left, Cori left with her and followed her master from battlefield to battlefield before one day Mar'Bora dissapeared and Cori was left all alone. Now isolated with no one to help her Cori was forced to fend for herself again, but unlike last time she was ready.

Taking a job as a fashion designer on Courasant, she would accept jobs to right the wrongs of the galaxy and began to travel further and further afield to help out where she could. She would later assume the title of Jedi Knight to better inspire those she had defended, and feeling as though she had mastered herself to a sufficent degree to be considered mature enough to take on the responsibility. Cori would take on the moniker of 'the Purple Knight' to better help lift the spits of people in the trouble times following the fall of Zakual.

Personality: Eternal innocence. (WIP)
Powers:
-Force Sensitive: Cori is considered adverage in terms of her sensitivity to the force, although does not rely heavily upon it outside her enhancments. Cori
--Skilled Force enhance: Cori is most skilled in force techniques that enhance the users body, increasing her speed, strength and endurance. She is talented with force absorb and sheild, and is one of the few Jedi to develop force sheild into the ability known as 'construct, being able to form semi-physical objects around things to support them and move them. Cori has shown the ability to create a sort of snorkle while under water to help with breathing through the force, and has admitted to using this same technique to stop her chest bouncing around during combat.
-Beauty: Cori is considered by many to breathtakingly beautiful, being very well endowed and her cheerful demeanor always brightening up everyones day. It is only receently though she has begun o use her beauty to her advantage to get information out of people.
Skills:
-Fencing: Cori is a talented lightsabre duelist, and often assosiates her love of dancing with her love of dueling: seeing them as one in the same. She has a fondness for Jar'Kai, duel blade fencing, although is versed in both single blade and staff sabre combat. She has a tendency to favour an aggressive offensive stance using her strength and speed to overwhelm an opponent with grace, skill and strengh, using her acrobatics to avoid blows and direct combat.
-Dancing: Cori has always loved to dance and still practices. Indeed Cori'senteye actually allots her early sucess in her training with a lightsabre to her dancing background as it taught her the basic footwork she needed to succeed. For example her fighting style with her lightwhip stems from her ribbon dancing background.
-Mucic: Cori is a decent singer, and while no  a master has a fondness for music and will ofte sing along or hum.
-Acrobatics: Cori's loves acrobatics, she loves to jump dive and roll, as it wa all parts of her old dance routines when she was till with her family. With the force she has pushed these abilities further and relies upon her acorbatics to help her avoid blows in combat.
-Hand to hand combat: Cori has been trained by five different people in hand to hand combat, and next to her fenncing is one of her best skills. She has shown the ability to beat opponents a lot larger than her, and in addition develop a higly unothodix fighting style that relies on a mix of acrobatics and kicks, with her legs being able to dent some metals with help from the force.
-Sewing: Cori is a talented seamstress. Having been trained by her mother and since joining the Jedi order often making robes for freinds and acomplises, she has had a lot of practice, and since going it alone Cori has become a fashion designer on courasant which has furtehr developed her skills.
-Armour designing: Cori during hear early time in the Order took an interest in combat armour from her freind Anwyeth, and in doing so too to maing her own. With her eye for designing cothes she has managed to become an equally talented armourer, and makes armour along with clothes and weapons.
-Mechanic: Cori is a decent mechanic and shows a decent understanding of technical parts, showing the ability to design her complicated lightsabres and keep her starship running.
-Pilot: Cori has shown the ability of a competent fighter pilot, and while not the best is considered able to hold her own in a dog fight.
Equipment:
-Two adaptive lightsabre's: Capable of using them single handed, duel weilding, combineing them into a sabre staff and even an automated switch function to turn them into light whips Cori's lightsabres are highly customised and extreamly ornate, although possess longer than normal handles. One blade is a bright mint green formed from the crystal she gained during a trial, while the other contains a crystal from the snae medellion that her mother gave her, which she removed to use in her first lightsabre.
-Combat armour: Cori owns dozens of sets of custom combat armour, which she often wears into battle due to her tendency to dodge of absorb attacks rather than block. However with the onslaught fro the Zakual's advanced blasters Corihas ften begun to leave the armour at home in favour of armour that improves her flexibility and acrobatics.
-Starship: Cori owns a starfighter and a small shuttlecraft

-Weaknesses
-Dense: Cori'senteye's greatest weakness is her dense air headedness. Cori is often oblivious to going ons around her unless it is explained to her in detail, she has a tendeny to not pick up on even obvious clues and is easily distracted by art and even shiny objects.
-Fear of Sith: Cori has yet to get over her fear of sith, being terrified even by the menion of their name, and dislikes associtating with anything from the empire. She has shown the ability to get past this but it takes time.
-Chest: Cori is a very busty woman, and unfortunatly suffers on ocasion from balance issues. Cori's very large chest has tripped her up on more than one ocasion due to its weight. This is a natural problem considering Cori's fondness for acrobatic and fast moving comba styles, hence why she often uses her force construct ability to support her chest in combat.
Facts
-Dyed Hair: Cori dyed her hair purple in honour of her first master Andis, who dyed her hair blue. Even after leaving her Cori insists on keeping her hair dyed
-Cori did not know what sex was untill she was 19: she was very innocent
-Cori with the force has at her maximum deadlifted up to half a ton in weight. She has also shown the ability with the force to kick through some metal and plasteel.
-Cori is still technically a Jedi Padwan, and assumed the title of Knight to inspire hope in others.
-Cori was made initially as a joke RP character, to make the most
-Cori's lightsabres are made with parts from all across the galaxy and are made with equipment she gathered dueing her first time trying to go it alone
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Date Taken
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Amalgamation100's avatar
I agree with AkaneKyoko and what she said, her anatomy is very well done

I very much enjoyed the story too! :D


I'm about to go on a rant tho prepare yourself lmao:


I do have a bone to pick but it's not with you, it's with George Lucas and Star Wars haha. Nobody understands Zen practices and it's because the people who write about them never delve deep enough into them, and part of this is all his fault for mis-representing it.

Not long ago I went on a trip to the Himalaya's in India, a small Village called Bir, they had a few Buddhist Temples and I stayed with Yoga teaches helping them with there Website in exchange for free board and food (so I only needed to pay for travel pretty much) 

I've delved deep into Yoga, Zen, and Meditation teachings through books and even going to the sources like I said, and yes I don't know everything about it, I ain't enlightened or any of that shit and anyone who claims to be is lying btw, enlightenment isn't achievable by the living and those few who might have don't claim to be, others claimed them to be (Jesus, Budda, etc)

Now George Lucas based his Jedi roughly on Zen and Buddhist Monks, crossed over with Space Samurai, which is really cool, and Yoda and Obi-Wan were really well done in the OG trilogy. In the Prequels however, it's like he lost total understanding of who they were...

what I am saying is that Jedi Master Andis sounds more like a true Zen Master than any of the other Jedi in this or in Star Wars canon lol. There's no reason meditation and being at peace (like I've practiced) will change who you are as a person, all it will do is make you a less conflicting, violent person. That's it. You're not supposed to suppress your emotions, quite the opposite, you're supposed to feel and embrace them in Zen.

It's like the common misconception in Meditation... you're not supposed to turn off your brain and not think anything, go blank mind, that's impossible. Mediation isn't not thinking lol. What Meditation is, is actually just letting your brain think what it wants but observing it from a different perspective. One way they teach is they say: imagine you are a transparent, like a ghost or a hologram, made of energy. Now, as your thoughts enter your mind, let them flow through you... don't delve on them, don't try to hold onto anything, simply let them pass on as if they are separate entities. If they linger accept it. This takes strength and discipline, people with self loathing Ego's will think terrible things like "you're worthless, pathetic, etc etc" you need to be able to let those pass through you, like energy, it all flows and will pass.

Another technique is to lay down and put a dot or something on your roof, a focal point to focus on, and put all your thoughts and energy into that point, meditation is best practiced before bed like reading.

eventually, you will achieve a state where you can zone out and have no thoughts... eventually, with discipline. You might get like a few seconds of that peaceful bliss on your first try if you're lucky lol. It could take weeks of practice but you end up with a clear mind, better confidence, more energy every morning and all the other health benefits like better a immune system all that stuff science found meditation has done, it helps creativity as well.

Sorry for going on a rant lol, but so many people who have this massive miss-interpretation of all this and think the Jedi are supposed to be soulless assholes and they are portrayed that way int he prequels but it's not... monk or Zen like at all...

You did a good job with Andis, he's cool. The other Jedi are just like the ones in the Prequel which is awesome because it's what you were going for but no wonder that order nearly got whipped the fuck out lol they're retards XD